Sentence strolling

Posted by sdsbloguser on September 23, 2015 in Uncategorized |

Today we looked at a boring sentence and then took it on a ‘stroll’ to improve it. We wrote our ideas on post it notes and spread them out on the carpet. Our original sentence was:
The cat ran up the wall.
After looking at our success criteria and generating ideas as a class, we came up with this sentence:
Just then the fat, determined, ginger cat sprinted speedily like lightning up the steep, slippery wall.


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